Comments on: Elevator Pitch Writing http://www.formulis.com/blog/elevator-pitch-writing.html Las Vegas Web Design, Las Vegas Marketing & SEO Tips, Advice & Guidance For Las Vegas Businesses Wed, 07 Jul 2010 03:57:22 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By: Michael Borowiecki http://www.formulis.com/blog/elevator-pitch-writing.html/comment-page-1#comment-704 Michael Borowiecki Fri, 08 Jan 2010 21:02:57 +0000 http://www.formulis.com/blog/?p=314#comment-704 Hi Sandy! Thank you for the positive comments and for becoming a loyal reader! Please do post comments and ask questions on any of the articles that are of interest. I'm more than happy to respond. Hi Sandy! Thank you for the positive comments and for becoming a loyal reader! Please do post comments and ask questions on any of the articles that are of interest. I’m more than happy to respond.

]]> By: sandy oestreich http://www.formulis.com/blog/elevator-pitch-writing.html/comment-page-1#comment-702 sandy oestreich Fri, 08 Jan 2010 20:29:20 +0000 http://www.formulis.com/blog/?p=314#comment-702 I've been avidly reading EACH of your pages of advice, and love them. I've been able to spot some areas that need improving on our site and in our general presentation. (Just, if I may suggest: it might be worthwhile to have a grammar checker scan the pages as things like using that for who , etc, as above, lowers credibility and seems too casual to take seriously. Sometimes it's surprising how many columns overlook these rules of the road.) Best to ya'll and happy new year. sandy o I’ve been avidly reading EACH of your pages of advice, and love them. I’ve been able to spot some areas that need improving on our site and in our general presentation.

(Just, if I may suggest: it might be worthwhile to have a grammar checker scan the pages as things like using that for who , etc, as above, lowers credibility and seems too casual to take seriously. Sometimes it’s surprising how many columns overlook these rules of the road.)
Best to ya’ll and happy new year.
sandy o

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